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Tuesday, October 28, 2014

An Awesome and Beautiful World

A narrative text by Grace Nathania

Once upon a time, Celia was in an awesome and beautiful wonderland but she didn’t know she was there because she passed out. Celia opened her eyes and wondered where she was. She only saw a green field and lots of flying purple dandelions. She looked around and found one stood over there. She tried to get up but her body felt so heavy that she couldn’t get up from the place she sat. Celia decided to call one over there. He walked more closely towards her and she asked him where she was. The one who stood named Angelo and he had been living there for 175 years but his face didn’t look old at all. He looked like a-25-year-old young man. He said that she was in an awesome and beautiful wonderland. She wondered how she could be in a wonderland.

Angelo brought Celia touring around the wonderland. Celia was really dazzled by its beauty. She could slide on a pastel color rainbow and enter other parts of the wonderland. She found all of the dandelions not whithering. Even the dandelions could be eaten by human and just a second people’s tummy would feel full. She wanted to take some dandelions to her world, but she couldn’t bring them.

Something from Celia’s pocket rang suddenly and Angelo said her time was over in wonderland. She didn’t want to go back to her world because she had found comfort in the wonderland. Angelo warned her what would happen soon but she ignored it. She kept walking around and enjoying the awesome and beautiful wonderland. Angelo couldn’t do anything and leave her alone. The wonderland changed suddenly a day after the time she should come back. What had Angelo said about the awesome and beautiful wonderland wasn't true. Awesome and beautiful wonderland became an awful place.

Celia was really sorry that she hadn’t come back to her world. She leaned back on the old tree but the old tree absorbed her body until it went inside. Inside the tree, she became very small and found lots of people there. This thing also happened to others inside the tree because they ignored the warning. Celia tried getting out of the tree but her effort failed. She couldn’t get out of the tree and she really felt sorry because she didn't choose to return to her world.

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